Tuesday, 24 November 2015

The Poem (Performance)

Hi Guys!

I'm going to write about what we did yesterday in poem! Enjoy!

My Poem:

What is it?
Who is it?
The aroma, from the candle,
fills everywhere around the room.
One, by one,
a person stands up and
says it
What is it?

I'm an audience
I'm sitting down
getting controlled by it
my feeling
making me sad
What is it?

Liking it
Disliking it:
Actions
Loudness
Quietness
Repeating
Making no sense
What is it?

It made me think
It made me want to do it
It made my feeling change
What is it?

It has powerful words
It has powerful phrases
It has powerful sentences
What is it?

Performing a Poem!


I hope it has made you want to read or write a poem!

See you!

1 comment:

  1. I LOVE this poem! You are so clever in keeping the reader wondering what you are writing about, and your repetitions are very powerful! You have to write more poems! You owe it to the world!

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