The Poem (Performance)

Hi Guys!

I'm going to write about what we did yesterday in poem! Enjoy!

My Poem:

What is it?

Who is it?

The aroma, from the candle,

fills everywhere around the room.

One, by one,

a person stands up and

says it

What is it?

I'm an audience

I'm sitting down

getting controlled by it

my feeling

making me sad

What is it?

Liking it

Disliking it:

Actions

Loudness

Quietness

Repeating

Making no sense

What is it?

It made me think

It made me want to do it

It made my feeling change

What is it?

It has powerful words

It has powerful phrases

It has powerful sentences

What is it?

Performing a Poem!

I hope it has made you want to read or write a poem!

See you!

Creative writing الكتابة الإبداعية

Hello! Recently, we started a new unit on creative writing/ English. We started writing a letter to the book we read (The link to the post about the book).

We first, looked at how we could write the letter, and what type of language, we should write, like in formal, or informal. Then we started looking at letters which are formal and informal, and looked at the difference. We also thought about the layout.

When we finished all that, we started write a letter to a character in a book. I felt like I was an adult! I tried to make it sound like a professional letter, but I couldn't. It was quite hard!

Recently, we started to write a letter to the author of the book. The best one, might be sent to her! It's amazing! I hope my letter will be sent!

Kind regards,

Rei

Swimming, Swimming, Swimming

Hi Guys! Last Sunday, I went to a school called St.Marys, and swam for my school BST! I swam 4 strokes, 200 medley relay, 50 free, 50 breast and 100 IM.

🔙Pool
My breastroke was a quite good, but my other times were terrible. My 50m freestyle time was 36sec and my 100 IM time was 1:31min! I did the relay, with all the older kids, like in year 7. Each people, was given a stroke to do, but we changed it around, so we might, have got a faster time. I thought that I could do better but I couldn't. Next time, I will try my best and try to get lots of PB(personal best).